Week #33 - Pearl

I was leaping from one lily pad to the other then I slipped into the still water, at that moment I realised I could breathe underwater. As I kept sinking down to the bottom, I shut my eyes and when I opened them I could see that I was in another world. In this strange world kids voices were trapped in jars. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. I stood still as the wind went through my clothes making me cold, I couldn’t speak I was petrified, so I just stood there helpless thinking what should I do.

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  1. Wow - lovely writing Pearl. Great emotive descriptions.
    Bravo!

    Stay safe and well.

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