Week #34 - Harriett


One day, I was sitting on a chair looking at the sky. I blinked, and then I felt the soft touch of a leaf on my face. I got up and then went to find my pet raccoon in her box. I gave her some food, then I went back to my chair. Then, when I got back to my chair I saw a very odd box, so I opened it. Inside of the box there was a very messy note saying pick me up I did and there was a leaf inside of it.

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  1. Mrs P25 May 2020 at 23:29

    Hi Harriett
    For some reason your 100WC has shown up as one long sentence on my screen so I am not sure if I have read the whole thing. Your choice of words has created a mental picture for the reader which is quite a skill!
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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