Week #35 - Cecilia

One day in the Woods there lived a kid named Max and a dog called Wonder. Wonder was always brave. One day, Wonder was playing tag with Max then...

Wonder lost the child soon he found his home he was happy then he looked up and the house was burnt down. His face filled up with tears, his family and his owners were gone, he ventured into the woods then found a lake he stood on the rock and looked up at the trees and sky. Thinking of them everyday, Wonder knew they were still with him in his heart.

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  1. Unknown7 June 2020 at 00:01

    Hi Cecilia. Thanks for sharing your writing this week, but it's very sad to read. Poor Wonder. I was hoping you were going to write that after losing the rest of the family, he went back to the bush and found Max.
    Remember to read your work aloud before you publish won't you. If you do, you'll find that there are a few full stops missing that disrupt the flow of the story a little.
    Are you able to set up the page so we don't have to scroll right and left? Perhaps you could talk to your teacher about this.
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth

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