Week #37 - Hayley

Mysteriously the cave felt like it was going to close. I told my big brother, “We should go back. This isn't exactly your playden is it?” 
“No.” he answered. “But I need to prove I can find that viola. I want to prove Mr Kitchen wrong.” 
I saw the cave close and I screamed “James!” He said “shut up.” 
“Oh fine.” I said hastily. 
Then he said “ Apparently It is made of the most ancient gold.” his eyes shined. 

I gasped” J J J James look!”  We escaped through a hole, ran home and said “We searched and found this!”

Comments

  1. Anonymous14 June 2020 at 14:23

    Dear Hayley,

    when you used expression it made it really easy to create a picture in my head. i especially liked it when you said " I gasped"

    From Mia

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  2. Anonymous26 August 2020 at 17:32

    Hi Mia
    Thank you for your comment
    Hayley

    ReplyDelete

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