Week #37 - Sam


Wow! I shouted. I was digging and suddenly something came up out of the dirt. It was a dusty old box. After finding it,  I was getting a little bit scared. 
Then I decided to open the box. It was not just a box, it was a gold box with brown on the outside. When I opened it I saw treasure. I searched as hard as I could to find my treasure.

I was trying to find my viola. I was lost and I couldn't find it. After a few minutes I looked in it again and it was old. 

Comments

  1. Mrs Boyce16 June 2020 at 04:44

    Hi Sam,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It sounds like a magical box to me.
    I'm wondering what treasure was in the box?
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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