Week #37 - Eva



One wet, windy day I was out treasure hunting with my friends to find the lost ancient gold in the jungle. We searched for hours and hours but we were only getting colder and colder by the second. 
The sun was beginning to set and we would soon be out under the stars for the night when we saw something old and rusty. It was a viola, maybe someone came to play here. 
Then our eyes opened wide as we saw what we had been looking for: the lost ancient gold was ours oh what luck we had tonight girls. 

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  1. Mrs Boyce16 June 2020 at 04:47

    Hi Eva,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I was glad you found the treasure - hard work pays off!
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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